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peopleofthedas2010-12-27 08:38 pm
nagia) wrote in peopleofthedas2010-12-27 08:38 pm
fic offering - "Bereskarn Skein"
Title: Bereskarn Skein
Fandom/Pairings: Dragon Age: Origins; eventual Zevran/f!Surana
Rating: ESRB Rating of M for Mature
Summary: Zevran was pretty sure he saw where this headlong rush to end the Blight was going: very far downhill, very quickly. And that was before the Grey Warden who spared his life turned into a bear. Now the only thing he's sure of is that it's not going to end like all the other fairy stories.
Crit: I'm new to the fandom, and more importantly, new to writing these characters! I've tried to capture them as accurately as possible, but if you notice something out of place, do feel free to point it out.
Notes: I play fast and loose with canonical dialogue, the contents of various cinematics, the order of minor events, etc. Fic starts in medias res, because confusion is good for the brain.
Bereskarn Skein
one: ma emma lin, ma emma abelas
Chapter title translates roughly to 'you are my blood, you are my sorrow.'
AO3 | Dreamwidth Mirror
Bereskarn Skein
two: is this the beginning or the ending of a dream?
AO3 | Dreamwidth Mirror
Fandom/Pairings: Dragon Age: Origins; eventual Zevran/f!Surana
Rating: ESRB Rating of M for Mature
Summary: Zevran was pretty sure he saw where this headlong rush to end the Blight was going: very far downhill, very quickly. And that was before the Grey Warden who spared his life turned into a bear. Now the only thing he's sure of is that it's not going to end like all the other fairy stories.
Crit: I'm new to the fandom, and more importantly, new to writing these characters! I've tried to capture them as accurately as possible, but if you notice something out of place, do feel free to point it out.
Notes: I play fast and loose with canonical dialogue, the contents of various cinematics, the order of minor events, etc. Fic starts in medias res, because confusion is good for the brain.
Bereskarn Skein
one: ma emma lin, ma emma abelas
Chapter title translates roughly to 'you are my blood, you are my sorrow.'
AO3 | Dreamwidth Mirror
Bereskarn Skein
two: is this the beginning or the ending of a dream?
AO3 | Dreamwidth Mirror
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♥ I'm glad to be here, and thanks for reminding me that this place existed.
I'd really like to read your Lahar background! I love the Surana origin because it is such a blank slate, and I love how many different takes there are for it.
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And blank slates, wit a little form are what make such wonderful character outlines that can then be warped and twisted and shaped and :squees:. They make the world go 'round.