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fic offering - "Bereskarn Skein"
Title: Bereskarn Skein
Fandom/Pairings: Dragon Age: Origins; eventual Zevran/f!Surana
Rating: ESRB Rating of M for Mature
Summary: Zevran was pretty sure he saw where this headlong rush to end the Blight was going: very far downhill, very quickly. And that was before the Grey Warden who spared his life turned into a bear. Now the only thing he's sure of is that it's not going to end like all the other fairy stories.
Crit: I'm new to the fandom, and more importantly, new to writing these characters! I've tried to capture them as accurately as possible, but if you notice something out of place, do feel free to point it out.
Notes: I play fast and loose with canonical dialogue, the contents of various cinematics, the order of minor events, etc. Fic starts in medias res, because confusion is good for the brain.
Bereskarn Skein
one: ma emma lin, ma emma abelas
Chapter title translates roughly to 'you are my blood, you are my sorrow.'
AO3 | Dreamwidth Mirror
Bereskarn Skein
two: is this the beginning or the ending of a dream?
AO3 | Dreamwidth Mirror
Fandom/Pairings: Dragon Age: Origins; eventual Zevran/f!Surana
Rating: ESRB Rating of M for Mature
Summary: Zevran was pretty sure he saw where this headlong rush to end the Blight was going: very far downhill, very quickly. And that was before the Grey Warden who spared his life turned into a bear. Now the only thing he's sure of is that it's not going to end like all the other fairy stories.
Crit: I'm new to the fandom, and more importantly, new to writing these characters! I've tried to capture them as accurately as possible, but if you notice something out of place, do feel free to point it out.
Notes: I play fast and loose with canonical dialogue, the contents of various cinematics, the order of minor events, etc. Fic starts in medias res, because confusion is good for the brain.
Bereskarn Skein
one: ma emma lin, ma emma abelas
Chapter title translates roughly to 'you are my blood, you are my sorrow.'
AO3 | Dreamwidth Mirror
Bereskarn Skein
two: is this the beginning or the ending of a dream?
AO3 | Dreamwidth Mirror
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I was actually waiting for somebody to catch that this Surana uses Elvish, which a City Elf indeed would not. I do have a very specific backstory in mind for Sens Surana that I don't want to spoil, but suffice to say that her immediate family split from her clan when she was eight, and she was found by Templars very, very soon after that fiasco.