That was so sweet, and so wonderful. Throughout this series it's always been clear that Zevran truly loves Alistair, and vice versa... it's what makes the series really endearing. Porn with heart. :) But the scene where Alistair finally brings himself to say it, and Zevran has so much trouble figuring out how to respond.... wow.

some inhibitions were harder to overcome than anything the Chantry could inflict

So perfect. I got a little teary.

I also really like your carol, and how you worked it in. Is that original? I could almost hear the melody, and the rhythm, which is awesome.