Thats better... now... This is SUCH a pretty story. I love the fact that you have written Anders as a freedom fighter rather than a self-loathing Terrorist. I seem to be in a minority in believing that he has very good reasons to do what he does in the game, I don't necessarily agree with his methods, but I can definitely see why he acts the way he does. I wish there was more dialogue near the end of act 3 that reflects this point of view.
I think you have mixed your sappy, sweet, angsty, and HOOOOOOT (!!!) in just the right amounts and the end result is a beautifully soulfull and well well balanced piece. I love love love it.
I also really liked the dialogue with Leandra, and the way you handled Justice/Vengeance.
*wanders off to grin like an idiot before reading this post again*
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*mutters incoherently*
*dived into tub of ice*
Thats better... now... This is SUCH a pretty story. I love the fact that you have written Anders as a freedom fighter rather than a self-loathing Terrorist. I seem to be in a minority in believing that he has very good reasons to do what he does in the game, I don't necessarily agree with his methods, but I can definitely see why he acts the way he does. I wish there was more dialogue near the end of act 3 that reflects this point of view.
I think you have mixed your sappy, sweet, angsty, and HOOOOOOT (!!!) in just the right amounts and the end result is a beautifully soulfull and well well balanced piece. I love love love it.
I also really liked the dialogue with Leandra, and the way you handled Justice/Vengeance.
*wanders off to grin like an idiot before reading this post again*