I love that opening line. Such a gorgeous rhythm - and the rhythm is there all the way through, with the mirroring of both points of view, and the subtle contrasts. Just... yummy, frankly. I also really like Danal's character; that studied nonchalance and knowing ease, acquired through hardship, and such a contrast to the way Fenris has responded to his own suffering. And, yes, there is definitely a story in how he managed to survive slavery. *looks hopeful*