I think the capitalization here is for the indication of their loyalty. It made sense to me, but if it is too bothersome to other readers, I might suggest italics for the same emphasis. I like it capitalized, I think I would have done it the same. But I am a writer, and kind of horrible without a professional editor and left to my own devices. Ha!
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I think the capitalization here is for the indication of their loyalty. It made sense to me, but if it is too bothersome to other readers, I might suggest italics for the same emphasis. I like it capitalized, I think I would have done it the same. But I am a writer, and kind of horrible without a professional editor and left to my own devices. Ha!