When I was writin' this I felt like the pacing of this was very... choppy. Blunt. Amku was like "Something needs to go here!" while I was all "Nooo it would ruin the tone....." So I'm glad you agree with me! This was originally a simple stand alone. It accosted me and refused to away and was all "WRITE ME WRITE ME WRITE ME!" So I wrote it. And then tried to go back to Murder and then Scraps (the second piece to this) was all "WRITE ME TOO WRITE ME TOO! :pesterpesterpester:"
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So I'm glad you agree with me!
This was originally a simple stand alone. It accosted me and refused to away and was all "WRITE ME WRITE ME WRITE ME!"
So I wrote it.
And then tried to go back to Murder and then Scraps (the second piece to this) was all "WRITE ME TOO WRITE ME TOO! :pesterpesterpester:"