thank you!! i'm so close to it, i really cannot tell half the time what i'm getting across and what's trapped in my own brain. i could not tell, honestly, that my speech changed, though i hoped it had, until my beta said something. OH now i remember i need to credit her at the top. wow. >.< so much of this is my past, it's honestly hard for me to determine whether or not the story is even interesting to anyone else. so, i seriously appreciate the feedback; from the heart: thank you.

:)

more thursday or so.