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miri1984 ([personal profile] miri1984) wrote in [community profile] peopleofthedas2012-01-01 08:59 pm

ASUNDER DISCUSSION POST


I will FULLY admit that I'm abusing my modly powers here, but I NEED TO DISCUSS STUFF. If you've read the novel, feel free to join discussion. If not SERIOUSLY SPOILERS. SO MANY SPOILERS. SPOILERS ALL OVER THE PLACE. DO NOT GO FORTH INTO THIS BLEAK NIGHT. I MEAN IT. I EVEN MADE A SPECIAL ASUNDER SPOILER TAG FOR IT.

DO YOU GET THAT?

SPOILERS.

darkrose: (da2: sebastian's crotch)

It wasn't that bad...but lord, it wasn't good

[personal profile] darkrose 2012-01-01 11:11 am (UTC)(link)
Strongly agreed that was better than either Stolen Throne or The Calling. The problem is...that's really not saying much.

The story was predictable and formulaic. Quest. Walking, walking, Fade, walking back, surprise, nothing's what you thought it was, random romance, ending that's a setup for the next game. The conclusion was exactly what I expected from what Varric says at the end of the game: the Circles rise up and some of the templars go rogue to chase after them. For that matter, "Your precious Chantry's fallen to pieces and brought the entire world to the brink of war" pretty much sums it up.

I did like the cameos, especially Fiona (I just about died when she called out Elthina) and Shale; Wynne was the same sanctimonious biddy she's always been AFAIC. The new lore about the Tranquil was interesting, and definitely puts the Anders/Karl scene in context. And Cole was kind of interesting once it became clear that he wasn't just Abused Kid Template #27.

Unfortunately, I really didn't care about most of the other characters. Rhys was frankly boring and slightly whiny. Evangeline's about-face seemed to come out of nowhere. Adrian was a two-dimensional harpy whose betrayal was obvious from miles away. And Lambert...dear sweet Maker, could he have been more of a cardboard villain? He made Meredith look complex.

There were also a couple of WTF? moments, like Wynne's Staff of Plottiness that was there and gone with no real explanation. And I couldn't figure out why, knowing what they knew at that point, Justinia was all, "Sorry, we're making you Tranquil again." Shouldn't it have been clear by then that death is more merciful?

My take-away is that the novel format doesn't play to Gaider's strengths. His best characters rely on the dialogue-tree format; when he has to spend all of his time in their heads, they come across as kind of flat, at least to me. Same with the romances. In game, there's an interaction with the player that generates the result. In all of his novels, I find myself scratching my head wondering why the hell these people suddenly fell in love, and why I should care.

To sum up: Meh. Not the worst $9.99 I've spent by a long shot, and a reasonable way to spend the most boring day of the year at work, but I've read better fanfic.
feckless_muse: (Default)

Re: It wasn't that bad...but lord, it wasn't good

[personal profile] feckless_muse 2012-01-01 11:33 pm (UTC)(link)
We have to fork out $25 here so I'm very grateful for your spoilery goodness.

I like the idea of the novels, but I'm frankly a little resentful they tie in so heavily to the games that we miss context unless we have read the books. Kinda feels like EA is double dipping.

*sigh* I shall wait until there is a second hand copy bouncing around somewhere to read the full story.
jessicajones: jessica crying (single_tear)

Re: Miri's SPOILERY RAMBLINGS.

[personal profile] jessicajones 2012-01-01 02:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I thought this book was way better than the other two, also, although I didn't like Rhys much at all. The idea of him was awesome, I was really intrigued that Wynne's son would be a Libertarian and they would butt heads over that, but... er. He was really bland. It seemed like the only reason he joined the Libertarians was to... shag Adrian, maybe? IDEK. I liked Maric a whole lot better.

Fiona showing up at the end was kinda dumb, also. She was not particularly smart or strong, or you know, in the Circle, so why on earth would she be the Grand Enchanter?

BUT THE TRANQUIL OMG SO COOL!! Pharamond's inability to control his emotions was really tragic and I was really moved by his last few scenes. And Shale was fantastic, the Abyssal Rift was actually written well enough to be scary, and I thought Cole's "powers" were really interesting. I say powers in quotes because... I'm not even sure they existed, that was really confusing.

Cole was a demon the whole time I guess? So maybe Rhys murdered people? Or maybe he didn't? I was confused too.
darkrose: (da2: goddamnit kirkwall)

Re: Miri's SPOILERY RAMBLINGS.

[personal profile] darkrose 2012-01-01 11:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Fiona showing up at the end was kinda dumb, also. She was not particularly smart or strong, or you know, in the Circle, so why on earth would she be the Grand Enchanter?

My guess was because as a Grey Warden (ex-Warden?) she was neutral, and wasn't technically affiliated with any particular Circle. And maybe she took a level in Badass since the Calling.
jessicajones: jessica crying (single_tear)

Re: Miri's SPOILERY RAMBLINGS.

[personal profile] jessicajones 2012-01-02 02:06 am (UTC)(link)
Okay... that's not a bad explanation. It still felt really random to me but I'll take it. :)
darkrose: (da2: goddamnit kirkwall)

Re: Miri's SPOILERY RAMBLINGS.

[personal profile] darkrose 2012-01-02 02:14 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, I'm kinda reaching there, because I liked her pointing out that Elthina's attempts to please everyone ended up in disaster.